Hi Dylan my name is Dazharn from Waikowhai primary school. I really like your descriptive piece of work its really colourful its really cute. I remember a time when my entire school want to the zoo and we saw a red panda and it look exactly the same as the one thats on your blog. Next time you could use a bit more sentences to make a paragraph because its to short and you could use more colour. come check my blog out http://wpsdazharnr.blogspot.co.nz/blog you later.
hi Dylan I liked the way you put the rea pander for the background for your slide. did you know that there is less than 10,000 red pandas. next time I think you should but some facts about it.
Hello Dylan, I'm Nikita from YMS I noticed you haven't added really any facts or things like. The Habitat or the type of food they eat, Just wanted to know of you could improve it by going back on the post then changing it in the future to show how you've improved it. It's still a great post and yes red pandas are cute. :) ~Nikita~
Hi Dylan. My name is Toby from Waikowhai Primary. I liked how you described the red panda but there were no real facts. It would improve it a lot if you put in some facts about it. This makes me think about our upcoming trip to the zoo. Check out my blog at https://wpstobysi.blogspot.com/ Blog ya later!
Hi Dylan, my name is Richard I go to Waikowhai Primary School. I really liked how you described that the Red Panda was adorable. Next time you could add more information like why you did and what it was for. I also really like that photo of the Panda I think it is very cute. Overall you did a very good job on this post. You can check out my blog at: http://wpsrichardm.blogspot.com. BYE
Morena Dylan! My Name is Sam I am a year 6 from Waikowhai Primary. I love the Red Panda, they are the cutest animal on earth! I did a bit of research on the red panda and found out a bit of where and how they live. Maybe next time you could add a bit more information about why you like them. Please come see my blog and follow me here is the link... https://wpssamuelh.blogspot.co.nz/ Bye!
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ReplyDeleteHi Dylan my name is Dazharn from Waikowhai primary school. I really like your descriptive piece of work its really colourful its really cute. I remember a time when my entire school want to the zoo and we saw a red panda and it look exactly the same as the one thats on your blog. Next time you could use a bit more sentences to make a paragraph because its to short and you could use more colour. come check my blog out http://wpsdazharnr.blogspot.co.nz/blog you later.
ReplyDeletehi Dylan I liked the way you put the rea pander for the background for your slide. did you know that there is less than 10,000 red pandas. next time I think you should but some facts about it.
ReplyDeleteHello Dylan, I'm Nikita from YMS I noticed you haven't added really any facts or things like. The Habitat or the type of food they eat, Just wanted to know of you could improve it by going back on the post then changing it in the future to show how you've improved it. It's still a great post and yes red pandas are cute. :) ~Nikita~
ReplyDeleteHi Dylan. My name is Toby from Waikowhai Primary. I liked how you described the red panda but there were no real facts. It would improve it a lot if you put in some facts about it. This makes me think about our upcoming trip to the zoo. Check out my blog at https://wpstobysi.blogspot.com/
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Hi Dylan, my name is Richard I go to Waikowhai Primary School. I really liked how you described that the Red Panda was adorable. Next time you could add more information like why you did and what it was for. I also really like that photo of the Panda I think it is very cute. Overall you did a very good job on this post. You can check out my blog at:
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Hi Dylan, you know who I am! The red panda looks cute. I don't know what to say so..
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Morena Dylan!
ReplyDeleteMy Name is Sam I am a year 6 from Waikowhai Primary.
I love the Red Panda, they are the cutest animal on earth!
I did a bit of research on the red panda and found out a bit of where and how they live.
Maybe next time you could add a bit more information about why you like them.
Please come see my blog and follow me here is the link...
https://wpssamuelh.blogspot.co.nz/
Bye!