This is a record of my learning at Papakura Central School, Auckland, New Zealand.
Great poem Dylan. I love how you have used your senses to describe, it takes me right there and helps me to visualise what it's like. Perhaps next time you could ask a buddy to help you check your spelling.from Mrs Drake
hi Dylan i like your poem you did about the best day ever from:keira
that was cool
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Great poem Dylan. I love how you have used your senses to describe, it takes me right there and helps me to visualise what it's like. Perhaps next time you could ask a buddy to help you check your spelling.
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hi Dylan
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from:keira
hi Dylan
ReplyDeletei like your poem you did about the best day ever
from:keira
that was cool
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